Tell me what you think..

[Antshiel]

OK, being picky but the first thing I noticed is that you say "i" all through the wording, instead of "I". Grammatical errors make it look a bit amateurish. Also, it suggests you are a "one man band". That can put off professional customers who are looking for a supplier that can meet their needs whatever, and sometimes they will discard anyone that gives that impression.

If it was me (and I did commission some advertising when I was self employed) I'd make use of the royal "we" whenever possible. It makes you look a bigger company, more professional and offers the customer a bit of comfort that you aren't going to fail to turn up because of the odd cold or domestic emergency. Other than that, looks good. Best of luck with it.

Just for you i've, sorry we've expanded the company.
and added a few bits..

[joker??]

very nice anthony might get you to do the woodwork in my third gen

[BUSHWHACKER]

very nice anthony might get you to do the woodwork in my third gen

D'you mean like a Morris Traveller?

[Diezel Weazel]

Very crisp, clear, clean nice Ant...

There's always a Payback.... Don't look for any warnings tho !!!!

[joker??]

D'you mean like a Morris Traveller?

jeeze vince wish i had a capt mannering pict to give you ,
was taking about dash

[Antshiel]

Very crisp, clear, clean nice Ant...

There's always a Payback.... Don't look for any warnings tho !!!!

Why thankyou sir

[Antshiel]

very nice anthony might get you to do the woodwork in my third gen

Can of petrol and a match will sort that for ya dave

[Antshiel]

Right then here's the result...

The finished product. A few hours work and this is as far as i have got. I've even splashed out on my very own domain name for two years.

Next will be registering with hypersubmit and get it on the search engines.

Please feel free to sign the guestbook and add any comments (no garbage please) and tell me what you think of it.

Right then, Who's first?

http://www.apspropertyfix.co.uk/

[Tallyman]

Just for you i've, sorry we've expanded the company.
and added a few bits..

Definite improvement. You can go play with the big boys now

[Antshiel]

Oh can I?......................Thanks

[madcampbell]

Hi Mate

Just had a quick scan, looks good and is easy to navigate.
The only thing is the home page under Carpentry you go "We" this "We" that...... then on the Property maintenance side you go back to "I" this "I" that.......for continuity you need either to be "we" or "I" not both as it contradicts it self...!! As pointed out before "we" sounds better.

Good Luck

Cheers
Mark

[Antshiel]

Thanks mate, consider it done.

[gwh200]

oi loikes it and have soined the guest book acordinlee

[Antshiel]

Woy tankyiw sor, oy wondid oo da heyl graham wors.

[gwh200]

Woy tankyiw sor, oy wondid oo da heyl graham wors.

woy ats me you big clot !!