Tell me what you think..

[Antshiel]

I had an hours play earlier and came up with this. So far:

http://www.aps.webeden.co.uk/

[si tate]

I had an hours play earlier and came up with this. So far:
http://www.aps.webeden.co.uk/

Looks very professional to me, i would have you fit my kitchen, well actually no i would'nt cos thats what i do for a living but if i did'nt i would let you, i like a man that takes a bit of pride in his work.

[Antshiel]

Looks very professional to me, i would have you fit my kitchen, well actually no i would'nt cos thats what i do for a living but if i did'nt i would let you, i like a man that takes a bit of pride in his work.

Tarvrimuch. Members discount applies too you know.

[nero279]

looks really good that, mate.

only 1 comment, the google ads are slow to load and load before everything else, which makes the pages take around 3-4 seconds to load, so nothing major. But unless you get paid for the advertising everytime someone clicks an internal link i'd try to put the main site contents into a frame or something so it just refreshes the frame and doesn't load a new ad if there's a way of doing that. Other than that it looks a really slick professional site to me.

[si tate]

Tarvrimuch. Members discount applies too you know.

Don't know what its like for you, but at the minute things have droped off a bit, what with the credit crunch, still ticking over nicely but i prefer to be snowed under.

[Antshiel]

looks really good that, mate.

only 1 comment, the google ads are slow to load and load before everything else, which makes the pages take around 3-4 seconds to load, so nothing major. But unless you get paid for the advertising everytime someone clicks an internal link i'd try to put the main site contents into a frame or something so it just refreshes the frame and doesn't load a new ad if there's a way of doing that. Other than that it looks a really slick professional site to me.

Cheers dude. That's the problem with not having to pay for the site. They stick any adverts they like in and i don't pay. When i've set it up as i want it i'll pay the fees and the ads will be removed. Until then "it's a freebie" and i'll have to live with it short term.

[Antshiel]

Don't know what its like for you, but at the minute things have droped off a bit, what with the credit crunch, still ticking over nicely but i prefer to be snowed under.

Things are a bit quieter than usual but still busy.

[nero279]

Cheers dude. That's the problem with not having to pay for the site. They stick any adverts they like in and i don't pay. When i've set it up as i want it i'll pay the fees and the ads will be removed. Until then "it's a freebie" and i'll have to live with it short term.

like i said it's nowt major, wouldn't worry about it in the short term, let em have their adverts for a while, at least until you got the site up and running and how you want it, 3-4 seconds ain't a long load time really. Just something to bear in mind for when the time comes that you're in a position to do something about it.

[Antshiel]

like i said it's nowt major, wouldn't worry about it in the short term, let em have their adverts for a while, at least until you got the site up and running and how you want it, 3-4 seconds ain't a long load time really. Just something to bear in mind for when the time comes that you're in a position to do something about it.

They'll get their £2.49 a month when i've finished it then the ads are gone. There's a lot more work needed to finish it yet so hey ho.

[si tate]

Things are a bit quieter than usual but still busy.

Good luck with it all mate, hopefully you will get some work from here, but knowing this lot you'll get paid in tyres & lift kits,but hey at least you'll have the best truck in town.

[BUSHWHACKER]

I had an hours play earlier and came up with this. So far:
http://www.aps.webeden.co.uk/

As GWH isn't around, May I say.......

That looth like a thuperb webthite, thplendid mithter Thiel.

[tintin]

Nice pro-looking site!

Never known a man need a whole box of gripfill to fit a kitchen before!
(on the windowcill in the pics)

Looks very smart, and is clear and easy to negotiate, what more could a punter want?

All the best with it.
Alan

[POPEYE]

Looks good to me Ant, Professional!!

[Antshiel]

As GWH isn't around, May I say.......

That looth like a thuperb webthite, thplendid mithter Thiel.

Well thankth mithter wackmeithter!

Nice pro-looking site!

Never known a man need a whole box of gripfill to fit a kitchen before!
(on the windowcill in the pics)

That was for the skirting

Looks very smart, and is clear and easy to negotiate, what more could a punter want?

All the best with it.
Alan

Looks good to me Ant, Professional!!

I didn't know it was so easy to do until now.

[Tallyman]

OK, being picky but the first thing I noticed is that you say "i" all through the wording, instead of "I". Grammatical errors make it look a bit amateurish. Also, it suggests you are a "one man band". That can put off professional customers who are looking for a supplier that can meet their needs whatever, and sometimes they will discard anyone that gives that impression.

If it was me (and I did commission some advertising when I was self employed) I'd make use of the royal "we" whenever possible. It makes you look a bigger company, more professional and offers the customer a bit of comfort that you aren't going to fail to turn up because of the odd cold or domestic emergency. Other than that, looks good. Best of luck with it.