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  • #16
    Originally posted by Rustinho View Post
    I see what you mean but it isn't explicitly clear what you're inviting people to on those invitations IMHO.

    Maybe change my suggestion to "wedding reception" then maybe?

    I can't remember what our wedding invites were like (the fateful day was in September last year). The wife sorted them all and I just needed to turn up on the day. Sober. Ish.
    appaerently i have to have input, so this is it, i have another invite here but these people will be invited to ours so cant copy theirs word for word....

    Ms X & Mr Y
    Request the pleasure of

    A & B

    to koin them for the

    evening celebration

    of their wedding

    on

    X X X X

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    • #17
      Originally posted by BigBobE View Post
      appaerently i have to have input, so this is it, i have another invite here but these people will be invited to ours so cant copy theirs word for word....
      I think I'd go for 'join' rather than 'koin'.

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      • #18
        hey sancho variety is the spice of life, anyway my keyboard has the stupid virus where when i type random letters are often replaced....

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        • #19
          Originally posted by BigBobE View Post
          hey sancho variety is the spice of life, anyway my keyboard has the stupid virus where when i type random letters are often replaced....
          That sounds a bit like the amusing thing you do to your bosses computer where you customise autocorrect in Word to change a particular person's name (preferably their boss) to something abusive!

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          • #20
            your invited to our reception at @ when .......
            dont forget to bring a bottle or whatever your drink and our prezzie
            see you there
            Say not always what you know, but always know what you say.

            My 4x4
            My choice
            Back off

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            • #21
              Originally posted by Koi View Post
              your invited to our reception at @ when .......
              dont forget to bring a bottle or whatever your drink and our prezzie
              see you there
              You forgot the poof bit nigel.
              Non intercooled nothing.

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              • #22
                Originally posted by Koi View Post
                your invited to our reception at @ when .......
                dont forget to bring a bottle or whatever your drink and our prezzie
                see you there
                sorry nigel, cant bring your own drink,

                we have the main ballroom including 2 bars

                still cant settle on wording, sod it,

                now its just gonna be:

                p1ss up after our wedding...

                hope your there

                Last edited by BigBobE; 20 January 2011, 20:54.

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                • #23
                  Originally posted by BigBobE View Post
                  sorry nigel, cant bring your own drink,

                  we have the main ballroom including 2 bars

                  still cant settle on wording, sod it,

                  now its just gonna be:

                  p1ss up after our wedding...

                  hope your there
                  It should be "hope you're there"

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                  • #24
                    Originally posted by gwh200 View Post
                    Neither Bob. Change the whole first line.

                    Edit...in fact just lose the whole first line.
                    My better half agrees,drop the first line!!!!

                    Congrats by the way!!!!

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                    • #25
                      Extra special works,

                      Extra MEMORABLE just doesn't scan or sound right when read aloud.

                      more memorable, hugely memorable etc all work but not just not "extra"

                      It sounds wrong like "more special" does, not sure if there is some grammatical rule why; but it doesn't scan at all.

                      Different top line would be better.

                      Make this extra special day more memorable! if that stops a row then use it lol

                      peace
                      cal
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