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  • Right, Quick Poll not truck related!!!

    right, SWMBO is doing up the wording on our wedding invites

    and we are having a dis aggreement on wording.....

    which of the 2 look better??


    A



    B

    11
    MEMORABLE
    9.09%
    1
    SPECIAL
    36.36%
    4
    SOMETHING DIFFERENT
    54.55%
    6

  • #2
    Neither Bob. Change the whole first line.

    Edit...in fact just lose the whole first line.
    Non intercooled nothing.

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    • #3
      go on then give GWH an idea,

      i am just stumped at the moment and this is my input....
      Last edited by BigBobE; 19 January 2011, 23:59.

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      • #4
        Yep agree with him ^
        Even more memorable might work, or maybe something like "To complete our special day......."
        "B.A." Baracus: "Talk to me, talk sense so I can talk back. Not all this jibberjabber like breaking the peace and all that."
        www.johnthebuilder.info

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        • #5
          Originally posted by BigBobE View Post
          go on then give an idea, i will be selling my truck tmr, and leaving this forum after this thread is closed and buying myself a mx-5 soft top....
          poof

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          • #6
            Lose the whole first line and put something like "To celebrate our wedding," at the start instead.

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            • #7
              Out of those two, special, but I agree the whole thing reads wrong.

              Why don't you say "We request the pleasure of your company to help us celebrate and party in style on our special day"

              Date and venue are in my diary by the way, thanks for the invite.

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              • #8
                Originally posted by Rustinho View Post
                Lose the whole first line and put something like "To celebrate our wedding," at the start instead.
                these are the invites for the afters only, we are only having 30 at the ceremony and meal.... but 150+ to the reception.....

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                • #9
                  Most fights at weddings are memorable... go for special, but pref something else..
                  __________________

                  Back in the day Baby

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by BigBobE View Post
                    go on then, I'm going to buy a huge power tool for homo's tommorow, and this is my personal input....
                    poof...

                    (I can see a pattern developing).
                    Non intercooled nothing.

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by BigBobE View Post
                      go on then give GWH an idea,

                      it's just a stump at the moment and this is my input....
                      poof

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by gwh200 View Post
                        poof...

                        (I can see a pattern developing).
                        you know pink is my most suited colour,

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by BigBobE View Post
                          you know pink is my most suited colour,
                          Poof
                          Do you know that, with a 50 character limit, it's

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                          • #14
                            Summat like this eg..

                            A/ Before the Wedding.. Robert & Paula request the pleasure of (Names)for a wedding Ceremony @ ............!!

                            B/ After the Wedding .. Mr & Mrs BigBobE request the pleasure of (Names) for an afternoon /evening to celebrate the wedding of Mr & Mrs BigBobE !!


                            Jess
                            "Cos short cuts can cost more in the long run"
                            Buncefield Burner

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                            • #15
                              Originally posted by BigBobE View Post
                              these are the invites for the afters only, we are only having 30 at the ceremony and meal.... but 150+ to the reception.....
                              I see what you mean but it isn't explicitly clear what you're inviting people to on those invitations IMHO.

                              Maybe change my suggestion to "wedding reception" then maybe?

                              I can't remember what our wedding invites were like (the fateful day was in September last year). The wife sorted them all and I just needed to turn up on the day. Sober. Ish.

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