yay, my site went active yesterday

[animal]

well my company website is up and running , just needs a few more things adding
opinions etc are welcomed
www.scuffsnscrapes.info

[Chris P. Bacon]

Hi,
I like the overall look.
Nice and clean and not cluttered.
I did spot a couple of typos though.
At the start you've written Iv rather than I've.
Just a little thing but...
Also the last line appears to have one too many as's.
Hope this doesn't sound too critical.
Hope it helps.
Good luck with it.
Regards
Chris

[animal]

no worries mate , its always good if someone can spot any mistakes so they can be corrected .

[MattF]

no worries mate , its always good if someone can spot any mistakes so they can be corrected .

You shouldn't have said that.

Home page: Fine except for the fact that you are sending a blank line before the doctype.

Contact page: What contact form?

Portfolio: Quite a few errors in the code on that page.

Overall though, not bad.

[hiroler]

Oh i did not realise you did wheels!!! on the surf i have steel wheels how much would you charge to re sprey them grey or black they are starting to show signs of rust on the chrome!

[animal]

about £25-£30 per wheel depending on how much rubbing down is needed first

give me a shout if you want them doing
07895 393564

[legendgamesmaster]

ooh... criticism..... cool

Right m8, only looked briefly.

home page, the 'about me' bit on the left, I suggest getting it re-worded (Its all about selling yourself on the web, 'coz on a professional level, its a bit matey-boy, and you ARE a professional aint ya! - make it sound (read) that way) such as:

Scuffs 'N' Scrapes can repair your car at home or at a place of work, for a fraction of body shop prices.

Kidderminster and surrounding Areas

* 10 years vehicle repair experience
* Body work trained at Glass-Aid, Bournemouth
* Windscreen repair trained at Autoglass
* Work undertaken on cars, motorbikes, caravans and lorries.
(add any more training / certificates, otehr work such as wheel work, spraying etc, but keep it simple)

Call Steve for a free, no obligation quote on 07895 393564 of fill in our [contact form]

Also, perhaps change the font in the image on the link bar as portfolio reads Por tfolio - i guess you have either an extra space of the font kerning for that typeface is not very good.

Get that form fixed (made)!!!

get an address on the site, I would have more confidence if i saw an address. all my sites have my address.

and i'm guessing its a dot info site coz you are not the dot co.uk company. Thats a bit of a pity, as many people will remember your name and put a .com or .co.uk on the end and get the other lot. make SURE people know you are a .info site.

well..... you did ask........

My wife caught a wall with a rear door panel and bit of wheel arch. What kindo price for patch ups with a bit of respray? its not too bad, in terms of dent, but there is bare metal showing on the arch where it popped the paint. we talking <£100 ballpark figure or >£100 for that kinda thing???

[Scorpion]

Great to see someone striking out on their own mate. I wish you the best of luck.

Just one small thing to point out, one of the lines on your web page reads...

I can also repair as well as cars, motorbikes, caravans, and lorries

.. there seems to be a word missing between 'repair' and 'as'.

[C9/89]

Great to see someone striking out on their own mate. I wish you the best of luck.

Just one small thing to point out, one of the lines on your web page reads...

I can also repair as well as cars, motorbikes, caravans, and lorries

.. there seems to be a word missing between 'repair' and 'as'.

Thats just a comma missing but it's poor grammar. Try simply "I repair cars, motorbikes, caravans and HGV's"

HTH

[Scorpion]

A comma wouldn't make any difference mate. There is either a word missing or a few words too many...

The line on the web page reads - I can also repair as well as cars, motorbikes, caravans, and lorries.

With an extra word it could be - I can also repair VANS as well as cars, motorbikes, caravans, and lorries

[surfenstein]

good on yer steve wish you all the best mate and good luck.now about that front bumper on the scooby.

[darkdezigns]

could have some advice on laquer??

[animal]

Right m8, only looked briefly.

home page, the 'about me' bit on the left, I suggest getting it re-worded (Its all about selling yourself on the web, 'coz on a professional level, its a bit matey-boy, and you ARE a professional aint ya! - make it sound (read) that way) such as:

Scuffs 'N' Scrapes can repair your car at home or at a place of work, for a fraction of body shop prices.

Kidderminster and surrounding Areas

* 10 years vehicle repair experience
* Body work trained at Glass-Aid, Bournemouth
* Windscreen repair trained at Autoglass
* Work undertaken on cars, motorbikes, caravans and lorries.
(add any more training / certificates, otehr work such as wheel work, spraying etc, but keep it simple)

Call Steve for a free, no obligation quote on 07895 393564 of fill in our [contact form]

Also, perhaps change the font in the image on the link bar as portfolio reads Por tfolio - i guess you have either an extra space of the font kerning for that typeface is not very good.

Get that form fixed (made)!!!

get an address on the site, I would have more confidence if i saw an address. all my sites have my address.

and i'm guessing its a dot info site coz you are not the dot co.uk company. Thats a bit of a pity, as many people will remember your name and put a .com or .co.uk on the end and get the other lot. make SURE people know you are a .info site.

well..... you did ask........

My wife caught a wall with a rear door panel and bit of wheel arch. What kindo price for patch ups with a bit of respray? its not too bad, in terms of dent, but there is bare metal showing on the arch where it popped the paint. we talking <£100 ballpark figure or >£100 for that kinda thing???

hi mate .
repair wise that sort of repair would be less than £100 , cant give an exact price without seeing the damage , you can email me some pics if you can and i can see what needs doing, or if you want to give me a bell i can arrange to pop over to give you a quote .

[animal]

good on yer steve wish you all the best mate and good luck.now about that front bumper on the scooby.

lol
when do you want it doing lol
about those shock parts i should have the details tomorrow for you ,

[animal]

could have some advice on laquer??

give me a call mate and i can chat to you about thew advice you need ,
07895 393564